Thursday, August 9, 2012

Spring

Today, I want to tell you the movie I watched. The movie is called Spring. The video is under this sentence.

                                          Spring Part 1



                                          Spring Part 2


Firstly, I will tell you what this movie is about. A small boy was playing and tying animals bodies to rocks. Monk found it out and decided to scold him. He told the boy if all the animals aren't alive, then, he got a stone around his back forever. Then, the boy found that the frog wasn't dead but fish and snake was dead. It  sort of tells you why and how you shouldn't kill living creatures and care about them.

Actually, this happens too, in my town. Some people kill ants by stepping on it, cut grasshoppers' legs and arms, and cut wings from dragonflies. They should feel sad, bad, and try to help them, but they think it is funny and know only as a joke. It shouldn't be like this. When I was little, I tried to catch grasshoppers but their legs were broken. I felt really really sad for them.

Even when I was young,  I killed tons of ants. My friends are keep doing it still, I said to stop, but they just kill them because ants do bad things to us. Yesterday, this happened. There was a bug on my pants so I took it out. Then, a girl stepped on it and it was squashed. Even more the bugs' body was separated. I really don't know why they still do that.

I have some examples. When I started to call other people names and sometimes hated my friends, my mom and teachers always told me same thing. That time I was young so I didn't know I'm doing it wrong or right. They tried to teach me. They said that think their feelings and change positions. Take care of other people as yourself. You have to know how they feel. If you like it, then, they will like it. If you hate it, then they will hate it. You and other things are same living things.

Today, I talked about Spring, the movie, the life that is similar to the movie, gave personal examples, and told you about my feelings. The lesson of this movie is to think about other people and change the positions before you say or act something. Martin Luther King Jr. said Darkness can't make darkness go away. Only light can. We have to care other people with care and love. Let's light up the world with caring starting today!



4 comments:

  1. Good work! The examples are well presented. It is easy to understand what you are trying to say. A great ending that is unique to you. That was impressive :)

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    1. Thank you. I will try to write like this conclusion next time too.

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  2. The essay is well-organized. It is a little short though, try adding more examples and aim for 450-500 words.

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